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"Collie's Captivity in the Monarchy of the Kingdom's Realm" by John Michael O'Loughlin 

"Collie's Captivity in the Monarchy of the Kingdom's Realm" is available in paperback, hardcover, and ebook formats at fine bookstores everywhere, both bricks & mortar and online. 

 

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 Published in 2004, "Collie's Captivity in the Monarchy of the Kingdom's Realm" contains many of the major elements involved in several international incidents of young American women on trial abroad between 2005 and 2011.  Eerie similarities in my novel to the trials of the American hikers held in Iran after accidently trespassing, the American women held as spies in North Korea and rescued by former President Clinton, and most particularly to the case of the American college girl just released from prison in Perugia, Italy on appeal are international incidents that all occurred after my book was published.  The common threads reflect how frequently young Americans have gotten into legal trouble abroad these days.  “Collie’s Captivity....” is the first novel in the "Collie in the Realm" series of books for teens and young adults.  The screenplay of the "arrest and trial" portion of the novel (Screenplay Title:  An American Girl On Trial Abroad) is now available for your consideration.  

  

Collie In The Realm:  "An American Girl On Trial Abroad"

A fifteen-year-old American high school cheerleader is arrested on foreign soil and scheduled to go on trial for her life, as worldwide attention is riveted on the tragic fate awaiting her if convicted.

 

The Screenplay of "An American Girl On Trial Abroad" (WG1485042) is now available for the consideration of industry professionals and can be reviewed at the link below.  Additonal details available are on www.inktip.com   

 --- John Michael O'Loughlin can be reached at lldjohn@aol.com

 

Not entirely innocent, a young American high school exchange student arrested overseas and scheduled for trial on capital charges of spying has worldwide attention riveted on the grim fate awaiting her if she's convicted.

In the first book in the "Collie in the Realm" series, an American exchange student and her boyfriend are arrested in a foreign country and charged with criminal offenses ranging from trespassing on Palace property to photographing military equipment.  While the American girl remains in the custody of the authorities in her host country, the more serious of the charges against her boyfriend are dropped and he is deported back to America.  Fifteen-year-old international exchange student Colleen Lee Knight (known by her nickname of "Collie" to her family and friends), faces capital charges of spying for an enemy nation and is jailed in conditions no teenage girl should ever have to face....  After her arrest, the shivering young American foreign exchange student is booked into jail, subjected to a strip search and body cavity examination by female soldiers of the Realm, and scheduled for immediate trial on capital charges of spying. Should Collie be found guilty by the Grand Council of the Realm of spying, then she's certain to face the death penalty. The horror of her situation and the cruel and harsh treatment she's forced to endure threaten both her physical and mental health.  Evidence against her has been carefully prepared by America's enemies to ensure her conviction and death sentence.  Since tears are considered a sign of weakness in the Realm, Collie tries to be as brave as she can while defending herself at trial.  She attempts to remain calm as she addresses those who will determine her fate, and forcefully declares her innocence, while pleading that the Council treat her mercifully by sending her away from the Monarchy of the Kingdom's Realm into permanent exile, and thus allowing her to return to her childhood home in America and sleep in her own bed, and in return she promises to remain in exile and never travel to the Realm and bother them ever again.  Her deep and heartfelt longings to be exiled and returned to her childhood home and be safe and protected in the loving care of her mommy, daddy, younger sister, extended family, and all her close friends is the punishment she hopes the Council will decide upon for her, and this is clearly evident to those who have the duty of determining what is to be done with her.  Some Council members appear moved by her emotional pleas to be sent home and think that this would be the best way to end a situation that threatens to become an international incident, while others find her entire defense unconvincing and it becomes increasingly clear that the vote of the Council will be too close to call in the case of Colleen Lee "Collie" Knight, accused American teenage girl spy.

Will Collie be able to convince a majority of the Grand Council members of her innocence? If she fails, will her family, friends, and American President Virginia Watker be able to save this young American from being shot as a spy by the Realm's military firing squad?  If not, Collie will suffer freezing cold in her drab and filthy cell, starvation, and relentless abuse from the Realm officer who seems determined to break down her strength and courage long before the day arrives when she'll be forced to stand before her executioners tearfully trembling with fear as they offer her a blindfold minutes before firing their rifles directly at her wildly beating heart.  
Her fellow citizens in the United States do everything they can to help this frightened young American teenage girl at trial overseas, but thousands of miles and complicated foreign rules and regulations hamper their efforts.  Despite any and all obstacles, Americans of all walks of life are deeply moved by Collie's plight and determined to somehow get her back safely to her home in Texas.  Collie's Mom asks all who are aware of her daughter's desperate situation and wish her well that you would remember her little girl in your prayers as Collie's family does everything they can think of to save their innocent child from the distinct possibility of being condemned to death by the authorities of her host country and forced to stand in front of their military firing squad on the day of her execution.

 

 

Amanda's Ordeal:

In truth, Amanda Knox is one of the many innocents whose lives have been forever shattered as a young woman's life was lost.  Please pray for them all as Amanda struggles through her lingering sadness and profound state of shock at the death of her friend and her own wrongful conviction in 2009. 

Amanda's many terribly difficult experiences in Perugia since she was first considered a suspect left her stunned at the injustice, and with an inability to fully comprehend how desperate her situation was and unable to participate fully in her own defense, and her deep state of shock was a direct result of the traumatic experiences she's suffered as an accused criminal in her host nation, the worst experience we know of being a harsh, grueling, and disturbing police interrogation, with the exact details of what was done to her during this interrogation remaining unclear to this day.  She's been a deeply frightened girl in captivity,  as she remembered how roughly she was treated by some of the police during her lengthy and torturous interrogation session, and had little confidence or trust in them to keep her safe from any harm in prison.  In the arms of her family, Amanda was able to find a place of safe refuge from the terrors of her prison environment and those terribly dark memories of her police interrogation that still haunt her.  She was able to release some of the suffering she's endured in softly muffled sobs and tears as her parents and sisters comforted and consoled her in their arms.  The part of each family visit she dreaded was when the guards told her that it's time for her family to leave...and it was always so difficut to bid them farewell so soon after they arrived.             

Foreign exchange student guests have a duty to obey the law while in their host nation, and a good host nation has a duty to provide all foreign exchange students within their borders accused of a criminal offense a fair police investigation free of harsh methods such as a police officer striking the accused or high-pressure interrogations without legal representation that go on for hour after hour and leave the accused in a state of extreme exhaustion and severe confusion and willing to say almost anything to end the mental torture of their relentless verbal abuse and the physical torture of being struck, and in a terrible state of thirst, hunger, and with an overwhelming need to go to the bathroom, which the interrogators won't permit and which finally and inevitably results in an accident.  And, after all this torment, having people not suspecting that what you are made to say was not a confession, but instead means you finally broke under the relentless abuse and mistreatment, and said what your interrogators insisted that would serve to end the suffering that you could no longer bear to go on... and, having those who hurt you use some harsh methods and deception eerily similar to what has been used in the past to make other accused innocents undergoing interrogation confess to crimes that they didn't commit, and to have your captors celebrate their having broken you to their will in spite of your innocence is cause for a continuing regret that you couldn't have resisted for another minute or two, and perhaps they would have given up......these feelings causing a mealancholy mood, and giving your appearance to others as one of being resigned to your fate, knowing that those who hurt you and forced you to say what they wanted you to say still had it in their power to return and cause even worse suffering to punish you or even kill you and make it appear you'd committed suicide in despair and hopelessness over what the future might bring....and knowing this, hope begins to fade in your heart for your innocence to become known and your imprisonment to end in freedom and a public declaration of innocence by those who have put you on trial.  If basic standards of fairness and decency in the treatment of prisoners are not met by a host nation, then a verdict of guilt at trial becomes forever tainted and subject to extreme skepticism and pointed questions from concerned individuals committed to giving those on trial an opportunity to fully defend themselves, and who are becoming dismayed by the profoundly sad unfairness of it all....Amanda Knox has suffered heartbreaking persecution, abuse, and betrayal from those she'd trusted to help her, and when her interrogators reported that "she buckled", it meant that they'd finally broken her to their will after subjecting her to hours of misery during a merciless all-night interrogation session. 

 

Although she was released from her foreign prison after winning her declaration of innocence on appeal early in October of 2011, Amanda Knox continues to suffer from ongoing legal threats to both herself and her loved ones.   

   

 

            

Collie in the Realm:

An American teenage cheerleader at boarding school overseas faces trial on capital charges of sneaking onto Palace property and capturing images of top secret military equipment on her camera while taking what she thought were just harmless tourist pictures of the handsome young Crown Prince of the Realm.

A 15-year-old American girl on trial abroad as a spy will face the death penalty if convicted....at fifteen years of age, Colleen Lee "Collie" Knight is still years away from adulthood in her American homeland.  However, in the Realm teens enter adulthood at age fifteen, and while in boarding school as an American foreign exchange student living and studying in the Monarchy of the Kingdom's Realm, ninth-grader Collie became an adult on the day she celebrated her fifteenth birthday.  The fact that she's an American citizen studying abroad does not mean that Collie will be permitted to remain in childhood in their Kingdom, and while she's in the Realm she'll be treated as any other young adult woman would be treated.  No longer a child by Realm standards, under their law Collie Knight is an adult and fully eligible to be sentenced to death for a capital crime if she's convicted at trial.  When informed by the Leader of the Realm's Grand Council that she will be tried as an adult and executed by firing squad before her sixteenth birthday if convicted on charges of spying, Collie faints at the stunning shock of the totally unexpected news that could mean she only has a short time left to live.  She'd heard that her host country's laws were strict, but had absolutely no idea that she could become a condemned criminal for some harmless schoolgirl mischief when sneaking onto the Palace grounds with her boyfriend and taking some innocent pictures of the handsome young Crown Prince and the rest of the Royal Family reviewing a prototype of the nation's newest military armor.              

Waves of homesickness and a deep longing to be with family and friends in the land of her birth temper moments of joy for this fifteen-year-old American teenage girl imprisoned overseas.  With all her heart, the frightened teen wishes that she might be released from confinement and allowed to fly far away from the Realm to return home to her parents and little sister.  With her family in America and not allowed to be with her at trial, Collie is forced to rely on her own resources in defending herself, and it makes her feel that the burden of this is more than she can bear all alone in this foreign land of strange laws and customs.  There are those in her host country who are kind and caring, and they do what they can to ease the suffering she must endure during incarceration and to help keep her spirits up as she faces the greatest ordeals of her young life.  The stories Collie remembers reading from her Catholic Children's Book of the Saints that tell of teenage girls and young women of faith throughout history who faced their persecution, imprisonment, torture, trials, convictions, and even death sentences and executions with courage, grace, and dignity help her find a place of inner peace and calm serenity amid the wild and confusing turmoil that often surrounds her.        

Some hope to use Collie's trial as a tool to advance their own personal political influence and power within the legal and military structures of the Realm, and they don't view her as a wrongfully accused innocent young teenage girl with hopes and dreams for her future, but rather as a stepping-stone that will allow them to advance at the price of her intense sorrow at being thought of as a spy and her many tears in prison as she fears that even in innocence she might have to face a sentence of death --- this is the price that they are only too willing for the jailed and vulnerable American girl to pay on their behalf to further their own selfish interests.  And sadly, there are some in the Realm who have even darker motives in their persecution of Collie Knight....  The conviction and death sentence against this American ninth-grade girl that they require to further their personal ambitions means dredging up some of the mistakes Collie made in her past and portraying her to the subjects of the Realm as a student who has already clearly shown the world that she has a well hidden dark side to her soul when she betrayed her former best friend at her middle school in Texas when they were both cheerleaders in seventh grade and training together to one day make the Senior Cheerleader Team at the local high school.  Because Collie lied to the authorities in her own home town, will anyone in the Realm believe her when she swears to tell only the truth to them at her trial?  The answer becomes obvious to all when the majority of those who will decide her fate no longer appear to be fully confident that what she's telling them is the whole truth, and when they quickly lose interest in listening to her repeated protestations of innocence, then young teenage Collie's fate seems sealed....

Should the young American foreign exchange student be found innocent of spying, then she'll be swiftly deported back to the USA for her crime of trespassing on Palace grounds and exiled for the rest of her life from ever returning to the Realm.  However, should she be found guilty of spying and taking a photograph of military hardware to sell to a nation hostile to the Realm, then Collie will be condemned to die before the year has ended.  Her executioners will ensure that she is granted a merciful death because the vast majority of Realm subjects have no desire to subject their prisoners to mental or physical torture or cause the condemned prisoners in their custody to suffer needlessly.  Those of the Realm who have come to care for her, and there are many, will do all they can to help Collie face her death with courage and dignity, and they'll expect her to stand before the firing squad fearlessly with her eyes uncovered and unflinchingly look the members of the firing squad directly in their eyes as they level their rifles to point straight towards her heart.  She will be given the opportunity to receive the last rites of her Roman Catholic faith just before her scheduled time of execution, and will be permitted to say her final prayers aloud as the squad leader makes the necessary  preparations moments before the projectiles are to slam into her heart .  Both a blindfold and cigarette will be offered to her, and she will be given the opportunity to smoke the entire cigarette before the firing sequence begins.  Should she wish it or the squad leader determine it necessary, Collie will be assisted in remaining standing perfectly still and upright by a harness attachment holding her securely to a wooden pillar, ensuring that the squad members are able to perform their duty without causing her physical pain.  She is welcome to accept or reject the offer of the cigarette or blindfold, and she is strongly encouraged by those in the Realm who have come to love her and deeply care for her to flatly reject the offer of the blindfold.  However, they do explain to her that should she accept the blindfold, then it will be gently positioned to cover her eyes without hurting her, and the squad leader will not make her feel ashamed or embarrassed in the slightest at her wanting the comfort of being blindfolded for her execution.  Collie's family members and those she requests be allowed to be with her on her final day on earth will be allowed to remain with her on death watch, and able to calm and comfort her as she awaits the end of her life on earth.  Her execution will be carried live throughout the Realm and abroad on television, and those in her homeland of the United States of America will be able to witness her last hours and understand that she was well treated during her final hours and died without physical suffering.  Collie knows that many of the Realm hate her and believe that she had intended to betray their nation's security for money, and therefore they feel she's a traitor to the nation that was a good host to her.  As much as she fears her death, she prays that those who hate her will come to learn the truth someday and understand that in life she was an innocent girl who was trapped in a web of circumstantial evidence, and an innocent victim of verbal trickery, deceit, and outright lies from those she'd trusted to help her... Then they'd understand that she never meant to cause any harm to the people or Royal Family of the Monarchy of the Kingdom's Realm, and that she was never a spy in the service of any foreign nation!  Collie prays for forgiveness for all those sins that she's ever committed in her short lifetime, and that she might be granted a measure of peace during the hours of suffering when she ponders her situation and is tempted to give in to despair.  She prays that she'll be capable of gracefully accepting a sentence of death if she must, and somehow find the courage to stand in front of her executioners with the brave demeanor that those who love her in the Realm would find admirable.   

Although many subjects of the Realm believe America on the verge of collapse and Americans to be a weak people living in a nation fading into the pages of history, most of them are willing to give Collie an opportunity to demonstrate her courage during what may be her final months on earth.  As she says her prayers each night before laying down to sleep, Collie wonders if she'll ever be found innocent and set free to return to America, or if she'll be forced to remain caged until her captors find her guilty and come to take her from her cell and lead her to the execution chamber to have her death sentence carried out by their military firing squad.  Collie knows that all those of the Realm who have come to love her and care about her will expect that she die bravely if she's found guilty at trial of spying, and she wonders as she confronts the very real possibility of her own death at age fifteen if she'll have the courage to look her executioners in their eyes without breaking down in tears and begging on her knees that they grant her mercy, spare her life, and set her free to return home to her mommy and daddy, and to live with her young elementary school sister in the room they'd once shared before she journeyed as an American exchange student to this strange yet oddly enchanting and endearing land that is the Monarchy of the Kingdom's Realm.

Collie's suffering, tears, and her inner strength during her time of captivity begin to influence and work a subtle change upon some of those who have rushed to judgment in their condemnation of her.  True, her tears are looked upon as weakness in the Realm, but they also serve to wash away some of the hate in the hearts of those people of good will who had opposed her without knowing who she really was, and her flashes of strength during deep times of suffering cause stirrings of compassion within them.   Those of the Realm who look closely at her for the first time begin to believe that they were mistaken in many of their initial judgments of her, and understand that she is a young woman who should be treated with merciful compassion, as well as the harsh justice that she would deserve if convicted under their strict legal system.   However, the ranks of those who oppose her also contain several who well understand that she is innocent of the capital charges against her, but strive to have her convicted for purposes that have nothing to do with either justice or mercy....and these are the ones she would fear most, if she but only knew who they were.  As in the profoundly sad and unfair persecution of college student Amanda Knox overseas, the arrest and trial of Colleen Lee "Collie" Knight in the Realm is in large part due to her social and cultural background, and because she's a citizen of a nation she loves, defends, and is proud to call her home.           

   

Friends of Amanda Knox
Amanda Knox Defense Fund 
Free Amanda Knox and Raffaele Sollecito 
Amanda & Raffaele Official Site 
 
Screenplay:  An American Girl On Trial Abroad

"Collie's Captivity in the Monarchy of the Kingdom's Realm" was published in 2004, and is the first in a series of "Collie in the Realm" books for teenagers and young adults.  The screenplay for the "arrest and trial" portion of the novel has been completed, and would most likely be rated PG-13 due to the intensity of the plot and the mature subject matter.  The second book in the "Collie in the Realm" series is currently a work-in-progress...."Collie's Family in the Monarchy of the Kingdom's Realm.    

Author's Statement:    I believe that my comrade Amanda Knox is the sweet, kind, and compassionate young woman that her family and friends have always known her to be, and that these qualities represent the very essence of her true nature.   I believed Amanda when she proclaimed her innocence after hearing her verdict of wrongful conviction, and trust that the Italian government will do what they can to compensate her and her family for the suffering they have endured because of her unjust arrest in 2007, and wrongful conviction in 2009.